Your blog is a sound record of your work Charlie which shows your progress through the two tasks. Your attention to detail in both pieces is apparent. You have maintained a consistent approach to your blog and the work develops well. You are clearly reflecting well on current practice and demonstrate understanding of the business. The research is well documented and reflected upon and clearly guides your decisions. The final product is a proficient achievement showing ability to shoot a range of images and manipulate them appropriately. The language and register are effective for your target audience and your work shows understanding of conventions. The final product is fully and confidently realised even if there are a few large unfilled spaces here and there. You have clearly enjoyed doing the work. The evaluation is detailed and shows your understanding of audience, institution and forms and conventions. Well thought through with reference to your decisions and revisions. Marks to date :Research & Planning: 14/20 Construction: 39/60 Evaluation: 16/20 =69/100
I am recommending that for Research and Planning you have 16 marks and for Construction 42. I think you should now concentrate on the exam. Email me any thoughts.
Your blog is a sound record of your work Charlie which shows your progress through the two tasks. Your attention to detail in both pieces is apparent. You have maintained a consistent approach to your blog and the work develops well. You are clearly reflecting well on current practice and demonstrate understanding of the business. The research is well documented and reflected upon and clearly guides your decisions. The final product is a proficient achievement showing ability to shoot a range of images and manipulate them appropriately. The language and register are effective for your target audience and your work shows understanding of conventions. The final product is fully and confidently realised even if there are a few large unfilled spaces here and there. You have clearly enjoyed doing the work. The evaluation is detailed and shows your understanding of audience, institution and forms and conventions. Well thought through with reference to your decisions and revisions.
ReplyDeleteMarks to date :Research & Planning: 14/20 Construction: 39/60 Evaluation: 16/20 =69/100
I am recommending that for Research and Planning you have 16 marks and for Construction 42.
ReplyDeleteI think you should now concentrate on the exam. Email me any thoughts.